This poem is for 's new workshop, hosted by . It's a workshop on punctuating, or not punctuating, with purpose.

This poem is revised. Originally I had lots of punctuation and different words/wording in some places.

1. Do you usually punctuate your poetry? Why/why not? Sometimes yes, sometimes no. I depends on the structure of the poem.
2. Are there lines in this poem where you were considering other punctuation (or no punctuation)? If so, what were you considering and why? This poem is something I wrote about 3 years ago originally. The original poem had lots of punctuation, some of which I originally intended to leave in, but in the end opted to cut out. I think I only left two punctuated areas in the this revised poem.
3. If this a new draft of an old poem, do you feel better about your choices this time, or do you feel as if you were forcing the punctuation use? I like the poem now with most of the punctuation cut out. I think it flows better when you read it aloud.
4. Overall, what is the effect you would like this poem to have on the reader? In other words, what are you going for, here? I just hope that the reader feels inspired to try to describe everyday things in more colorful language. It's a fun exercise, trying to create detailed images in someone's mind when dealing with a simple subject.